xanthan gum

Sunset slips on like silk, touching golden on your supple skin. And the earth is graspless, as if without friction on this dazzling twilight that refuses to engulf the azure ...

while the sun in the sky dimmer shone. there MUST be a better way to say this. there must be... otherwise, nice. you keep the rhythm in the rhyme.

Chores? That's quaint. --Captain Aloisio Do you have a sweet tooth?

Study vocabulary, break out of repitition and just simple, repeating rhyme schemes. With those simple mechanics, you have the potential to be great.

Wow. I read half these books when I was younger than ten. What I find suprising it that I've read many books with violent language and sexual scenes that never ...

Yeah. It's gummy. *sigh* Did you know that I found out about xanthan gum on the back of Aquafresh toothpaste?

I think the ending could be a revised a bit. For, no matter how many times your doorbell rings The comma in this line really isn't needed, and it makes ...

and footsteps sound(s). It's the same either way - sounds, sound - so I suggest you just take away the "s". The tactic being applied previously, you don't want it ...

Blood splatters on the window sill, I stand, poised, tip-toed and tasting the flammable air. Wallpaper adorned with flags and the thought of united we fall, it slips down the ...

What was said above is true. Another thing is that, even in moderation, you must be careful that the fragment does not sound "chopped off". That and please PLEASE don't ...

Swashbuckling half-blind Aloisio folded the papers in a flash, revealing his face from behind the ebony desk. Gold latches jangled as he jumped to his black-booted feet. Men dressed in ...

We always knew this day would come. Sometimes, yes, the doubt was there – perpetual days and nights spent winding out the same clockwise days, never thinking twice of executing ...

Life is a pen, darling. If we cannot erase, then - must we resign ourselves to leave the page? Are not more beautiful when marred? Immersed in navy blue regret ...

Wow. Beautiful. I'm saving it, just because I know it's gonna make me cry one day. I feel like one of those people watching the lights turn off one by ...

This has been an honor. I enjoyed every minute of this site, and I flourished in writing in ways I never thought I could. I actually have motivation for my ...